Nothing left
I wrote this one a long ago...then today i was looking into my old posts in my other blog n i found this, n when i saw it i was like "wow, that`s a cool song! who wrote this, what song is this? that is so cool..." then i realized i had written it; it`s the first time i was really impressed by something i`d written i think so, thus me explaining all this now.
12/28/04
Nothing left to subtract , now he`s walking on his own
there are voices whispering, hear the winding howl
there`s nothing left intact, they`ve taken his heart
ripped his soul, the present is beating hard
there`s a coldness in the air, he`s contemplating the knife
the words come to his mind, he can`t bear with life
his lips move faintly, "the future`s too far away"
empty steps walking with a short delay
paused life for a moment, thoughts knocking in
he has no place to call home, no love to sleep with
he wants clouds as wings, faith as love
but he`s got none, she`s now gone
never divided, now far apart
there she is in heaven, watching his dawn
"i know someday you`ll have a beautiful life"
she thinks, while the sky can`t bear his cries
he lighted her candles, amidst the cemetery
she gave him paradise, a love always steady
she was tattooed to his heart, now he has a bitter half
there`s nothing inside but reason gone mad
12/28/04
Nothing left to subtract , now he`s walking on his own
there are voices whispering, hear the winding howl
there`s nothing left intact, they`ve taken his heart
ripped his soul, the present is beating hard
there`s a coldness in the air, he`s contemplating the knife
the words come to his mind, he can`t bear with life
his lips move faintly, "the future`s too far away"
empty steps walking with a short delay
paused life for a moment, thoughts knocking in
he has no place to call home, no love to sleep with
he wants clouds as wings, faith as love
but he`s got none, she`s now gone
never divided, now far apart
there she is in heaven, watching his dawn
"i know someday you`ll have a beautiful life"
she thinks, while the sky can`t bear his cries
he lighted her candles, amidst the cemetery
she gave him paradise, a love always steady
she was tattooed to his heart, now he has a bitter half
there`s nothing inside but reason gone mad
5 Comments:
yo digo que ana rima con banana pero tus rimas estan mucho mejor pensadas.(rimó!!) tienes talento muchachito, te quedo muy bien, me gustó.
thanks, hun! :)
sip, mio mio...:)
Solo pasaba por aqui y vaya sorpresa que me doy, muy buen trabajo dude. Seria un honor escucharlas completas (con guitarra y todo).
hey vanluxury, gracias man...no te preocupes k toy trabajando en eso, lo k pasa es k no es tan facil como yo pensaba...hehehe
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